Riff-Off 3.3: The Apprentice

[crusty philtrum]

Re: Riff-Off 3.3: The Apprentice

Of the three entries in this round, I don't see this one making the final. I appreciate the execution, but it seems like so many riffs i've heard in this genre. However, you have done really well to have come this far, and congratulations.

 

[Tor]

Re: Riff-Off 3.3: The Apprentice

You've got the chops, no doubt. The tone is not helping you though, you need to filter out that fizziness. I've got to say that your last contribution was much more interesting. But well done, anyhow!