Rough song-idea 2 guitars

[StrangeSound]

Hey. I fell in love to create 2 different guitarparts.
Here you can find a new song idea. Somehow I wrote it some minutes ago because many things are messed up. It´s recorded very quick, just to hold this moment. How do you like it?

Take care,
Adrian

 

[VHoholic]

Re: Rough song-idea 2 guitars

Sounds cool Strangesound!

 

[Chi3f]

Re: Rough song-idea 2 guitars

sounds like 3 guitar parts? i like it however the backing guitars' tone being good by itself. Doesn't fit for me with the lead lines.

But that's just me

 

[nuntius]

Re: Rough song-idea 2 guitars

Hey man thats great!

But I agree with Chi3f about the tones, have you heard Alvin_Lee_Fan's newest clip? That kinda tone would fit better imo, or just any fat clean sound with some verb, then it'd be chilled to the extreme :smoker:

 

[rayz]

Re: Rough song-idea 2 guitars

Hey that was good, i loved the way the two lead tracks were doing different things and harmonized out of nowhere, great idea to work on, and the tone was awesome!

 

[rayz]

Re: Rough song-idea 2 guitars

i agree with nuntius and chi3f about the clean tone not fitting in, but the lead tone was way to good.

 

[StrangeSound]

Re: Rough song-idea 2 guitars

Thank you

It was a try and I appreciate your comments to make this thing better. I´ll be working on that.

 

[TwilightOdyssey]

Re: Rough song-idea 2 guitars

I think your tone is fine, but it sounds like the guitar parts are widly out of sequence with each other, to my ears ...

 

[StrangeSound]

Re: Rough song-idea 2 guitars

I think your tone is fine, but it sounds like the guitar parts are widly out of sequence with each other, to my ears ...

Yes, that´s very recognizable. I played the clean part 4 measures and "looped" it 3 or 4 times. I didn´t cut it that good. It´s a very rough version. I wanted some feedback about this idea. Thanks for listening.

 

[Davey]

Re: Rough song-idea 2 guitars

i'd really like to hear this developed into something bigger.

i somehow have the inability to produce nice clean parts and a slow-ish melody

and i gotta record it in the spur of the moment or i forget everything.

like the lead tone, and the double harmony, but at some parts you drift too far apart with them