I just look at my playing and see other players and feel bad about my playing
as for constructive criticism no reason to feel bad ever, be at one with where you are
try using a metronome and playing slower stuff, you might find out you like non-shred music too ;-)
You've only been playing for 11 months? Dude, that sounds great!
There's nothing inherently wrong with your playing, not at all. You sound fine, especially for 11 months in.
People ask me how long it takes to learn to play guitar somewhat proficiently. I tell them 18-24 months to get the basics down (and that's if you practice a LOT) and a lifetime to master. You never stop learning or trying to get better, but you gotta do it for yourself.
Divide your guitar time between uncommitted jamming/improv/riffing, learning material you like (woodshedding) and focusing on specific technique or theory that you want to improve. You'll be fine. Practicing to a metronome or a backing track will do wonders for your playing, especially when it comes time to play in the studio or with a band.
Keep up the good work, man!
Lot's of great advice here so far.
for 11 months your on your way man. However, since you asked for it here's a few things I noticed:
-Small technique issues. I think your right hand position is going to cause you some issues going forward when playing fast palm muted stuff. Unfortunately this would be stuff I'd need to sit down with you with, can't really describe over a forum
-Except for MOP, your timing was actually pretty good. When structuring practice make sure you put in some time for some work with a metronome. It's boring but man does it pay off. I wish more drummers did this...****, don't get me started.
-Look for ways to 'streamline' your playing and practice doing power chords with your index and pinky. I saw many different fingerings and alot of unnecessary movement like someone else mentioned
-Glad to hear someone jamming out some Dissection!!
Keep on truckin' man! Your definitely on the right path it seems
Really? I thought I should have progressed much further...
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