HELP! I need help developing this song!

[guitartesta]

I forgot the chords to this so I gotta sit through play and jot out a lead sheet to this tune... Eugh! other than that being a problem I would like some suggestions on where you would think this song should go... I'll post the lead sheet asap...

Anyway the song is Simply Detached and it has just been updated on soundclick...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/testamusic.htm


Thanks a bunch,
And may the schwarts be with you.

 

[Rotten Guitar String]

Re: HELP! I need help developing this song!

I enjoyed that!

To me it just seemed a bit drawn out though. Mabe you could make it a little more "to the point" if that makes sense.