Rainbow Road

[ericmeyer4]

I finished a song... its been awhile but I finished this today. I think this is about the 3rd time I've reworked this song. My girlfriend thought it sounded like it should be in Mario Kart so that is where the name comes from. Let me know what you think.

Rainbow Road

 

[JOLLY]

Re: Rainbow Road

Cool..it makes me feel like I'm walking through a cave in a video game.

 

[larry_emder]

Re: Rainbow Road

Very cool idea, and would suit a video game quite well. Lead playing could be better, but overall nice

 

[daemon barbeque]

Re: Rainbow Road

Cool mood!

 

[ericmeyer4]

Re: Rainbow Road

Lead playing could be better

Explain please. I would like to work on areas that need improvement.

 

[ericmeyer4]

Re: Rainbow Road

I went back and listened to it. I think I may know what you are talking about between 30 and 45 sec there is just a little section where I sound unsure of what I am playing.

 

[larry_emder]

Re: Rainbow Road

Yeah , just get rid of the 'unsureness'.

Not that i can speak (listen to my song), but i usually do a few different takes of a lead/solo and use the one that fits best. OR, i write the solo beforehand

 

[ericmeyer4]

Re: Rainbow Road

Yeah , just get rid of the 'unsureness'.

Not that i can speak (listen to my song), but i usually do a few different takes of a lead/solo and use the one that fits best. OR, i write the solo beforehand

That is usually what I do. I tackled that one section at a time. I fixed the unsurness. I just need to go back now and turn it into an mp3 and upload it.

Thanks for the feedback!

Eric